Green seeds are sleeping at the womb of mother earth,
At night she comes naked like a succubus,
Her unlocked hair is blowing in the air!
I wake up, calm; fickle city life!
Wine! Wine! Empty glass! I think I was drunk!
I was traveling in the vale of the upper soul’s desire!
And was experiencing a brave new world!
I come to an evergreen land, unknown!
Here people are cultivating wild plants and weeds,
Scenic, green, hope, producing more oxygen!
My wildest will is turning into real!
by Vikram Roy
8 Jan,2012 3:20AM
***New thoughts! An amateur try!
Thanks!
With Love!
I like it
Thanks Katrina! Love and hugs! 🙂
doors are one of my favorite photographic subjects. What lies beyond?
Love it…Wonderful
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Ann
its different..
I love it•*¨*•.¸¸♥
I like your poetry Vikram, write more!!
‘the vale of the upper soul’s desire.’ Can’t help but like that line.
So far, I think it’s one of your best! I really like the metaphor of the
“unlocked hair”, but be careful to stay away from anything cliché like “a brave new world”. Your poet has a climate to it, an intimacy and isn’t it what one tries to create with poetry?
Keep sending them.
I am not about dystopian Brave New World… simply I imagine new, young, healthy generation of brave and energetic people around the world! Hugs! 🙂
I like your poetry too!
Loved it!
nice one..have tried another facet for the same…in my blog by( press this.)..
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Delightful–always refreshing to try something new like this!
Life giving green and pure fresh oxygen: truly a dream come true. I join you in this dream for our earth, dear Vikram! Just a wonderfully well-formed poem about your dream.
Green will begin the brave new world….Hope will produce fresh oxygen… Our challenge will be to rise human voice against dirty politics, junkie culture, fake commercials, pseudo actors, and spoiled society! Thanks granbee… Hugs! 🙂
Through the door that locks us into the turmoil of city life… stepping from the man-made world into the world of peace, of color, of beauty… I’m living that dream. I felt your words before I was able to make the change.
Just try to turn everything into green…your own garden of eternal love! One day the trees will begin the revolution! Thanks for the words! Hugs! 🙂
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The whole thing, photo and verse, has a really wonderful fresh and experimental sense of whimsy to it. I keep scrolling up to look back at the photo 🙂
Good beginning 🙂
Congrates, love, hugs, and kisses for all like and all lovely comments! 🙂
Excellent.
LOVE this image!
Nice work!
Amazing – gives lots of visual impressions. Cool.
Terrific visual description of your dream. 😉
beatiful! your blog looks very pretty. love its look.
I love your door, some of my favorite subjects are doors leading to nowhere… Super pic!
awesome!
Thanks Dr. Suesszues-Zen! 🙂